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Sonic, You Ass

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Page 2 (of 4) of a redraw of Sonic the Hedgehog #153's "Songoose" story. Redrawing from another artist's visual material isn't at all like drawing from a script, but this was just practice and layout portfolio. ;)

Fiona Fox totally owned this page, and the conversation. With Fi doing all the talking, I figured it better to cut a panel - to avoid talking-head syndrome - and just insert a big cut-out shot of Fiona, with room to arrange the word-balloons around her.

Panel 5 was my first real significant departure from how the action was originally laid out. In the original page, Mr. Lim drew Sonic and Fiona walking off together. The dialogue - summed up, Fiona says something like "Sonic, you're really an ass sometimes." - really told Sonic off, though. I felt that, given the context of the dialogue, the scene worked much better emotionally if Sonic was left behind alone, confused at what he could possibly have said wrong.

StH153::"Songoose"
Written by: Karl Bollers
Originally drawn by: Ron Lim
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